This year seems to be passing so incredibly quickly. I think it’s partially due to that fact that I’m already 8 weeks into semester whereas back home, this would be the first week back. Which is insane. Despite essays dealines looming, or perhaps because of them, I actually wrote quite a bit of SSHK this week. When I planned out my week on Sunday night, I had the vague requirement of writing 800 words of it. I think I wrote all that on Monday night and as of last night, I’m onto Chapter Two (according to the plan I wrote up a few weeks ago). The word count for my essay is looking a lot less healthy…
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As today is the 4th (and each entry must relate in some way to the date), here in an excerpt from scene 4. Introducing a new character, Maisha, though you may remember the name from an earlier snippet.
The context: She returns home at dawn from a heavy night of drinking and canoodling with her boyf, feeling pretty much on top of the world and completely off her guard. She arrives home to a surprise.
Maisha looked the woman up and down, from her polished boots to the thick auburn hair framing her face. She was shorter than Maisha but then, most people were.
“Maisha,” the woman said, “I am Jahinda, priestess of Memset, and a Finder.”
Maisha furrowed her brows. There was something significant about this. She could tell from the expressions of the others in the room but she couldn’t think through the alcohol fog to remember what it was. “Are you recruiting me to the priesthood?” she asked, then laughed at the ridiculous of the notion. She regarded the gods the same way she regarded the suns ability to stay suspended in the sky – mostly certain but with a healthy dose of suspicion.
The woman, Jahinda, smiled, “No, Maisha. The Sacred Flame of Deshral has chosen you to become one of the Four who rule Erelda, the Soldier.”
Maisha looked to her father and back to the priestess, “No, I’m not.”
I’ve been asking myself the same question… of course I live in New England where the snow is still feet deep!
Haha well, March doesn’t always equal spring. Hopefully it warms up for you soon though! 🙂
Ugh, yes! I can’t believe it’s March. And yet it’s still snowing here. Sigh.
I love this line: “She regarded the gods the same way she regarded the suns ability to stay suspended in the sky – mostly certain but with a healthy dose of suspicion.” That made me giggle because, well, yeah.
I’m glad becasue I wasn’t a hundred percent sure of it myself. Hopefully it warms up soon! 🙂
Oooh! She seems reluctant! Goodie! 😀
l don’t understand how it’s already March, either!
I love the line about the sun, too, and also how her confidence suddenly drops in that “Wait-what?” moment.
Hehe yep, that was definitely a shock to the system. 😛
Love her response, No I’m not. Sounds like things will get even more interesting!
LOL! “No, I’m not.” Love it. Ah, this story is sounding more and more fun each week!
I’m glad you think so 🙂
Yep – I love the completely honest response to a statement like that also. Wish spring would head this way – woke up to another 5 to 7 inches of snow this morning.
Haha, poor Maisha, what a thing to hear the second she arrives home. Such a perfect automatic response! I love the line about the gods too, it made me laugh.
The year definitely seems like it’s going faster than it should be…
Love this “mostly certain but with a healthy dose of suspicion”. Nice. And her last comment, simple, to the point, and so resolute. *sigh* Maisha, Maisha, Maisha.
Hehe. I really feel that this scene sums Maisha’s attitude up pretty well. Which should be fun as things progress. 😛