WIPpet Wednesday

I haven’t had a chance to write anything new since Sunday, so this is from a scene I rewrote then.

A description bit:

The cool darkness washed over her, a shock after the bright summer sun out on the terrace. A lancing pain shot through her temple and she winced, taking a moment to lean against the cool stucco wall until the woozy sensation passed.

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9 thoughts on “WIPpet Wednesday

  1. Emily Witt says:

    Agreeing with everyone else on how good the description is here. I’ve also had sharp pains like that shoot my head, and the description of her having to lean on the wall to wait for it to pass is exactly howo it is.

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